Ethan

up is my reading mum k plz look here(: HI ETHAN CAN YOU PLEASE CORRECT YOUR 1. Look up incorrect spellings. 2. Add supporting detail to the topic sentences of your paragraphs as we previously discussed. 3. Adjectives,may be a simile, connectives at the beginning of some of your paragraphs. 4. Capital letters for places and the beginning of sentences. 5 Add full stops to the end of your sentences.
 * date || title || page || author || time || signiture ||
 * 25 Aug || wild things extinct and endangered || all || KCC || 20 || Steph vw ||
 * 25 Aug || Whizzer and Chips July 88 || all || Fleetway Publications etc || 10 || Steph vw ||

Ethan's speech shark finning Sharks are being killed not for meat but for there fins! Well you maybe thinking 'So who cares, they kill us too. But you're wrong! millions of sharks get killed and only a five hundred get of people get killed.(100'000'000-100) etc. So how do these greedy people do they're job? they catch a shark cut of its fins and dump the body over board. So now do you think that sharks matter here is a few facts about whats happening

so when the body hits the bottom of the sea and dies it starts to rot and occasionally some scuba divers might be looking for some thing valubles and they might stumble upon a dead shark body eww and who knows what can happen next!

What do they use the fins for?well thay use the fins for shark fin soop that isint even falaverd by the fins the fin are only for texture!And the soop can cost up to $100

And the web has proven that if we kill all the sharks it will upset the food chain wiping out most life!!!

And we nz haven't band shark finning!!! Us have Australia has and Mexico, samoa,Spain,brazil,Canada,India and Egypt.

so now you know that sharks are very important and there numbers are going down,fast so spread the word sharks are importint so if you see a sharks don't be alarmed don't kill it just leave it and watch it swim away and you can

LC more details given to topic sentences. Research your facts, Write conclusion. Must be 2.30 long

From here on is my letter k :)

Aukland 2016 Dear Mr McKay My name is Ethan and on behalf of the PTA at our school would like to invite you to our EPIC Willow Bank school gala! So we can fundraise money for a new School hall. Because if we want to either have a full School assembly. Or a warm space to do our speech it isn't possible. Because we have to open up the wind shield to let the year 6,s in and the hall is also to small for all of the School.

So to make this gala a success. We would like for you to donate a voucher or something so we can make the gala a success.If you do make this agreement we would post the donation on the wiki and we will advertise your company around the School. We will be very grateful for any donations possible.

Thank you for your time.

Yours sincerely Ethan

Sights for our School

willowbank.school.nz/ (wiki)

pta@willowbank.school.nz (

=Ethan’s science experiment=

=Things to find in your=

blender 1 liter of vinegar 1 table spoon of washing powder 3 cup strainer

First you blend up the red cabbage until it terns dark purple then you water down the cabbage juice until normal purple then sift and separate the juice into to cups after that put the vinegar in one cup with cabbage juice and look it terns red then put the washing powder in the other cabbage juice cup and it terns green then in the empty cup put the contence of the other cups into the last cup and it terns blue and froths up then shake it twice and it terns back to purple.

2wbsEthan